Classmate Critique

With the sharing of my magazine draft my peers were able to give me feedback on things they enjoyed and thought could use more work.

The Draft Presented

Positives Comments:

- Good organization

- Nice editing

- Looked aesthetically pleasing

- Had well-taken photos

Suggestions for Improvement:

- Make the cover image brighter

- Coverlines are difficult to read; busy background

- Descriptions for articles in TOC

- Make TOC less plain and dull

- Include information that directly ties into the images in DPS

- Be more informative in DPS